march 2008

Guess I've changed
just about everything,
not especially for the better
different, yes
better, no

January 2008

Whoa -- it's certainly gotten
a lot more florid in the last month,
and the characters feel less staid.

Now, there's an awkwardness about Eve
that bothers me,
and the piece seems uneven
left to right






These figures have pulped out some more,
and feel a little more desperate.
But has the piece improved ?










This piece feels scarier,
and more magical,
and I'm happy about that.
Can I ratchet it up any more ?
I'm not sure.




I'm afraid
I do kind of like the earlier version
better.

This figure is getting too awkward.

I'm trying to make her feel
more as a prisoner of her destiny